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All Deviations


Ships lie on distant shores
You can spot them through cracked telescopes
Children of fear come in scores
You can see them cradling their broken hopes
Marching on the horizon
The sun won’t be rise’on
Anymore…

All the colors gone to right
Now the world is painted white

Shattered visions
Lie behind closed doors
Crushed ambitions
Scattered on the floors
Paranoia creeps into the confines
Of the blue rose void

They washed the world
With cowardice
Harbored with cruel words
Spurned by malice
The tears they cried
Were alone
Because societies bonds
Are what they call home

Their ships come in on a riding star
But it’s got a leak so they won’t go far

Shattered visions
Lie behind closed doors
Crushed ambitions
Scattered on the floors
Paranoia creeps into the confines
Of the blue rose void
Of the blue rose void

Hidden in sadness
No one understands
Ignorance is gladness
At mercies hands
A rift opens up
Before their eyes
Staring in wonder
At. The. Skies.
Of Blue

They can try to plead
With the universe
But the birds aren’t listening
And no one drives a hearse
Into the blue rose void

You could have helped them
Instead they were condemned
By feeble actions
And evil words of children
Blind thoughts
Of parental
You’re caught
Life is so instrumental

The glass will pull them in
The ships destroyed
It was not but a toy boat
Sucked into the void
You can hear them calling
Not thinking their worth much
Their final anxiety
Relived without touch

As the depths come closer
And emotion departs
These monsters created
Once had feeble hearts
Crushed by the heaven now hell
Sucked into reality
Spit out with the bell
It rang in solidity
In the bowls
Of the blue rose void
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so, i was at my friedns house eysterday, and i've had a really bad week, but at her house i saw this amzaing canvas picture done by her sister and i wa sinspired to write about all the things it made me feel just looking at it. This is it. I am currently condeming the world due to the cruel words of children and parents who juts DONT understand what each egneraton goes through. It is happening. The poepl i know, i meet, they have fallen into the void of shattered glass and blank emotion. They have shut themselves off to the world because of childhood expiriences and family matters. My sadness...my pain...their pain, everything i see in them, its in this song. Everything.
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~asteria24:iconasteria24: May 4, 2008, 8:49:32 PM
...I believe that one day, despite our best intentions, We Will Become Like Them. Scary thought, especially considering my father and my paternal grandmother. Like it or not, I will develop Alzheimers, high blood pressure, overweight-ness, stubborness, and high cholesterol. However, I believe that our worldviews - our causes and moral beliefs - these are influenced by our experiences, in turn influenced by the society and situations in which we are raised. So the real question is: how similar are our conditions to the conditions in which our parents were raised? In my case, they are pretty damn similar, since my parents are pretty old-fashioned and i don't believe socitey has changed all that much.
Sorry to be a downer-

Love the imagery in your poem.

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~Ayameofthesand:iconAyameofthesand: May 5, 2008, 5:54:35 AM
well, the over-weightness can be stopped, but alzheimers runs in your family? Yea, the wolr d hasn't changed much....were all the still the same and histroy is going to repeat itslef over and over again until times end. I know who I am to this world now....thanks for helping me figure it out just now. ^_^

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